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[Mar10Josh OC Creator ReUpload]

Art can be improved on a bit, mainly with making curvy lines more rounded.
The winking eye is weirdly cut off at the top, there's no legs or left arm, and the background has a lot of stuff that's behind some of the buttons making it look messy.

Some of the shirts have missing detail (aka missing a gray line). Overall, bad game, but good first attempt! You'll only get better with time! :D

josiahhaha responds:

Oh yeah...
Also, no gray lines for my shirts
(Update) And it's not fully loading stuff like the top, and probably would have the new fixes!

[Boss Fight]

There's no sound effects or music, but at least the pixel art is nice. Gameplay is good, though idk why blocking exists when dodge is much faster than blocking. Would like to see this concept in a bigger game than boss fights.

yassineAloui responds:

blocking is mainly for the ranged attacks of the boss, and the dodge for the melee. if you liked the pixel art you can look at the credits there I put the link to its creator
and thanks for the feedback

[Valgus]

I can barely see anything with the game being this dark (even with brightness turned all the way up, it was hard to tell if a spike was there). Though if you fix that, it looks like it would be fun. Also, the part with the 1st boxes is so laggy.

Edit: Well now the brightness issue is fixed. Still laggy as hell though in that part.

HeavyBro responds:

There are torches in the game, you can pick them up. Sorry for not making the prompt about that.

[Luna Attack]

LOL this one is definitely an improvement! Maybe you could add stuff like more guns and ammo and reloading but the base game (aka this) is pretty decent now!

danielhsp responds:

Ok man i do it tank you!!!

[Big Bouncy Boi]

This is a fun game, though there should be a "how the game works" description in either the description or in the game itself.

Collision with the donuts seems to be based on your rotation which looks and plays worse and should be consistent despite rotation. Also music and sound effects would be nice, obviously.

If all the bugs are ironed out, then it could be a fun time killer. (Also make arrow keys an option for movement)

NewGradeGames responds:

Thank you for your comment, i will fix collision and add arrow keys.

[Dead Mario New York, New York]

Well that was...interesting.

PackHams responds:

dead mario